I hate to harp on what I said before, but the very first section should be on understanding player ratings and what they do. It's the first thing new players look at and this guide should tell them what makes a good player. Just saying overall rating isn't a good indicator isn't good enough. You have to describe core ratings for each position and the overall impact each rating has on a player's effectiveness.
Also, in regards to FSS, in the middle of the section you say " Buying FSS is the single most important tool, you can't recruit a good team without knowing potential". This should be bolded and put at the top of the recruiting section.