I'm not sure I agree with the logic on No. 3 of the "in all other cases" section.
I realize the intent here is to probably do away with the practice of giving/removing/regiving of the redshirt until you get a favorable RNG result and the kid takes it with no/minimal penalty. That said, it seems illogical to me that there's no counterweight given for where a kid will be more favorable to accept the redshirt as the season progresses and said player has yet to see a minute of live action. As I'm reading the above, the kid will respond the same if I offer a redshirt 14 times in the preseason or once a day for 14 days into the season, and that doesn't seem right. In the first case, the kid might be resistant thinking he can still contribute that year if given the chance. In the latter case, more than half a season has progressed and in that case a kid might finally be starting to see the writing on the wall and begin looking out for his longterm future, in which case saving the year of eligibility (so he can transfer, so he can play more at the school, whatever) would seem to be the better option.
I'm also a little confused by the "if you've told a kid he will not be redshirted" phrase. Is there a way we can tell a kid he won't be redshirted? Or will this now be the "default" belief of every recruit UNLESS they're informed there will be a redshirt? I'm just confused since start and minutes promises are covered under another line, and those would seem to me to be the only way a kid could get the impression within the game that he's not going to be redshirted.