RSP777 wrote an awesome ORIGINAL poem recently which he wrote because he doesn't.t lie.

We're going to break it down here. HIS ORIGINAL POEM. Which he totally wrote.

And he will occasionally post to comment on our progress as we break it down.

We're gonna break it down line by line as we get into the mind of RSP777...one of your favorites.

HERE'S THE POEM HE WROTE:

You're such an inspiration for the ways
That I'll never ever choose to be
Oh so many ways for me to show you
How the savior has abandoned you
**** your God
Your Lord and your Christ
He did this
Took all you had and
Left you this way
Still you pray, you never stray
Never taste of the fruit
You never thought to question why
It's not like you killed someone
It's not like you drove a hateful spear into his side
Praise the one who left you
Broken down and paralyzed
He did it all for you
He did it all for you
Oh so many many ways for me to show you
How your dogma has abandoned you
Pray to your Christ, to your god
Never taste of the fruit
Never stray, never break…

NOW LET'S BREAK IT DOWN!

My first impression is how depressive and pointed the entire effort is as opposed to world view.

Let's here what RSP777 has to say..............

He's probably passed out again. I don't know if it's crack or alcohol or pills.

I don't think we should have to pay for his lazy on his very own original poem he told us he wrote.

So let's just go ahead and do the first two lines..........

You're such an inspiration for the ways
That I'll never ever choose to be

This looks like a simple choice. We do it every day. Not worth a poem.

Oh so many ways for me to show you
How the savior has abandoned you

THIS IS GETTING DISTURBING FAST

**** your God
Your Lord and your Christ
He did this

CALL THE POLICE! REDNECK NAZI ON PREMISE! HELP!!!!

Umm.........pretend this never happened. Ugly people like this don't exist. You're gonna be OK. GOD HELP US!

Awesome poem, rsp!!!!!!!!

Posted by bronxcheer on 5/6/2020 3:56:00 PM (view original):
Awesome poem, rsp!!!!!!!!

We've seen your cartoons. You fit the profile. Welcome aboard redneck.

A POEM I DID NOT WRITE: by DougOut..........


3:24NOW PLAYING

The Rolling Stones - Dear Doctor (Official Lyric Video)

A short poem by Mike Flynn:

INNOCENT!

“Judith”

A Perfect Circle

Peak Position 4

Weeks On Chart 27

Only you think it’s a “poem” dummy.

Posted by rsp777 on 5/7/2020 7:15:00 PM (view original):

“Judith”

A Perfect Circle

Peak Position 4

Weeks On Chart 27

Only you think it’s a “poem” dummy.

I don't think very much of your new poem "Judith"

It doesn't rhyme. circle - 4 - 27 - dummy. Makes no sense.

Stick to potty mouth and redlining. You're good at that.

When I want information and I need it now....I go to the RSP777 threads. There's not too many of them. ?