My approach to this league has changed so much since the start that any kind of old fashioned advice I could give is probably unhelpful. I really only notice other people's teams if they take several guys I either had my eye on to take next or just passed over recently. On your team, Gerald Wallace was a guy I heavily considered multiple times, so I think you got extremely good value out of him.
In a conventional sense, I like both Magic & Moses' value where you got them, and Willis has pretty good value, too (I think you got him in round 5?). I think Klay in round 3 is about where he should go, and he gives you exactly what you need with those other 4 guys on the floor. Pressey is a fine backup for Magic, particularly gotten where you got him. Reggie is Klay without defense - can't expect much more at this late. I've used Amir several times in this league, and he's solid, but I don't think I usually took him till 11 or 12. Still, he's very solid. I'm extremely low on guys like Boerwinkle now, but again, you didnt't reach to get him. I'd call your team solid all around, and I'm not sure what specifically I'd tell you to do differently than you did this time; each pick made sense when you made it. There's not much better you can do than that!